There are some things I liked, some more things I disliked. But the main thing that made me stop playing was the writing style. It does not fit the medium you picked, because it is written like a book.
Why are all these things and actions so extensively described to us when you can show us?
(Small thing as well, the tags list "2D" but the animation is clearly 3D.)
I totally get what you're saying about writing. To be honest, I love book style, because it allows me get into the atmosphere. I understand it not for everyone. I will definitely think about how to balance show and tell in future chapters!
My bad with tag, I fixed it!
Thanks again for sharing your honest feedback - it will help!
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There are some things I liked, some more things I disliked. But the main thing that made me stop playing was the writing style. It does not fit the medium you picked, because it is written like a book.
Why are all these things and actions so extensively described to us when you can show us?
(Small thing as well, the tags list "2D" but the animation is clearly 3D.)
Thanks for the feedback! I really appreciate it!
I totally get what you're saying about writing. To be honest, I love book style, because it allows me get into the atmosphere. I understand it not for everyone. I will definitely think about how to balance show and tell in future chapters!
My bad with tag, I fixed it!
Thanks again for sharing your honest feedback - it will help!
you cannot install the game. says there is no install files
If you downloaded archive, there should be a "MyNovel.exe". That's the file you need to run game. Hope it will help!