There are some things I liked, some more things I disliked. But the main thing that made me stop playing was the writing style. It does not fit the medium you picked, because it is written like a book.
Why are all these things and actions so extensively described to us when you can show us?
(Small thing as well, the tags list "2D" but the animation is clearly 3D.)
I totally get what you're saying about writing. To be honest, I love book style, because it allows me get into the atmosphere. I understand it not for everyone. I will definitely think about how to balance show and tell in future chapters!
My bad with tag, I fixed it!
Thanks again for sharing your honest feedback - it will help!
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Can you make the download aviable for the itch.io browser? I might find the explanation text from another dev again if needed.
Yeah, it would be helpful.
The downloadable is v0.3, but after reading it I revised the file and the app check wasn't on, sorry about that, is an easy to ignore checkbox
I think this was it that he said the dev that had to do it the last time, of course it's a different situation but it helped someone already.
Hi I see nothing happened yet, have you looked for it?
I gave you a text that i got from another dev so far it helped a few others with finding the options.
Looks amazing! Thank you!
There are some things I liked, some more things I disliked. But the main thing that made me stop playing was the writing style. It does not fit the medium you picked, because it is written like a book.
Why are all these things and actions so extensively described to us when you can show us?
(Small thing as well, the tags list "2D" but the animation is clearly 3D.)
Thanks for the feedback! I really appreciate it!
I totally get what you're saying about writing. To be honest, I love book style, because it allows me get into the atmosphere. I understand it not for everyone. I will definitely think about how to balance show and tell in future chapters!
My bad with tag, I fixed it!
Thanks again for sharing your honest feedback - it will help!
you cannot install the game. says there is no install files
If you downloaded archive, there should be a "MyNovel.exe". That's the file you need to run game. Hope it will help!